Josh Cembellin: A favorite poem

Oranges
by Gary Soto

Gary Soto’s “Oranges” is the epitome of what many writing instructors preach: “Show, don’t tell.”  In “Oranges” Soto captures the innocence of and nostalgia for childhood through evocative details, methodical rhythms, and simple yet pure language.  In two wonderfully crafted stanzas, Soto recreates the many emotions of young love.  The culminating metaphor of a fire burning in the child’s hands demonstrates the complexity of his desire–an uncontrollable feeling which he attempts to contain in the moment.

Josh Cembellin, age 28
Teacher
San Jose

Oranges

The first time I walked
With a girl, I was twelve,
Cold, and weighted down
With two oranges in my jacket.
December. Frost cracking
Beneath my steps, my breath
Before me, then gone,
As I walked toward
Her house, the one whose
Porch light burned yellow
Night and day, in any weather.
A dog barked at me, until
She came out pulling
At her gloves, face bright
With rouge. I smiled,
Touched her shoulder, and led
Her down the street, across
A used car lot and a line
Of newly planted trees,
Until we were breathing
Before a drugstore. We
Entered, the tiny bell
Bringing a saleslady
Down a narrow aisle of goods.
I turned to the candies
Tiered like bleachers,
And asked what she wanted—
Light in her eyes, a smile
Starting at the corners
Of her mouth. I fingered
A nickle in my pocket,
And when she lifted a chocolate
That cost a dime,
I didn’t say anything.
I took the nickle from
My pocket, then an orange,
And set them quietly on
The counter. When I looked up,
The lady’s eyes met mine,
And held them, knowing
Very well what it was all
About.

Outside,
A few cars hissing past,
Fog hanging like old
Coats between the trees.
I took my girl’s hand
In mine for two blocks,
Then released it to let
Her unwrap the chocolate.
I peeled my orange
That was so bright against
The gray of December
That, from some distance,
Someone might have thought
I was making a fire in my hands.

Gary Soto

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